Saturday, March 22, 2008

#2 The Climax of this novel

The part that was climax was when Jack made his tribe and chases Ralph. I was worried when Jack rebelled against Ralph and made his own tribe in the first place. I felt he was going to make Ralph in trouble and he did. Jack’s tribe was going to search the whole island for him. When there was nobody on Ralph side, my heart was pounding hard. Especially when Ralph was hiding I was too nervous to read on. I wished Ralph could blend in with them instead of being the target. If the officer did not come, Ralph would have been in the same situation as Simon and Piggy.

2 comments:

Jenny Kim said...
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Jesse Park said...

Yes, I agree with your opinnion about the climax. I also thought the climax was when the Ralph was chased by the hunters and met the naval officer. I was relieved when the naval officer arrived just before Ralph was about to be killed. Good posting:]